Ideas- My peers seemed to like a lot of the ideas that I was presenting throughout my paper. They seem to think that I am on the right path with these ideas but there is some points in my paper where I can elaborate further on an idea or even present the idea earlier in the paper so it’s present throughout when reading.
Evidence- My peers also see this as something I can work on. While my ideas are somewhat present the could be further proven with some insertion from Alexander, Brandt and Bronwyn. My peers have a couple of suggestions as to where I can use those three the help prove my ideas true.
Organization- There wasn’t too much to work on here. There was only on spot where I inserted a quote and it didn’t fit with the idea that was present.
Local- I had a few places where punctuation was missing but I can just insert the proper punctuation in and will look how it should.
