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  1. Hi Jeremy,

    Instead of posting a link to text file like you have here, can you make it easier on readers and cut-and-paste the text directly into the post so they don’t have to download your file and open a new application to read it?

    Turns out you submitted a picture. That too should be put into the post. Let me know if you encounter difficulties.

    It looks like you’ve captured some of the endless conversation about offense/defense. You seem to have reconstructed the conversation rather than finding it out there somewhere on the web. That’s OK, I guess, in some cases, but when you are seeking to join a conversation, it’s important for you to “listen in” directly by finding your own sources, rather than constructing what people must have said, which is kind of what you did.

    When you do find the conversation, keep track of WHO said WHAT and in reply to WHOM. That’s important stuff to keep track of when you have to write and represent all sides of the conversation in your paper.

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